Thursday, June 13, 2019
X-Factor
Here is my writing on X- Factor. I don't really enjoy writing but this was fun. Hope you enjoy
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Hello Harry,
ReplyDeleteYou made understand what you were feeling with your writing. I like the way you started with feelings which hooked me in and then it is in paragraph two that you write, "My name is...". It works really well.
I think you should keep writing. Maybe think about why this was fun and see if you can write in a similar way again.
Mrs Krausse