Thursday, August 15, 2019
My speech about Poverty
Hi this is my speech and liked my speech cause I had a good topic and that I didn't have do it front of lots of people so I wasn't that hard.
I chose my topic because there are lots of people living in poverty and some people don't know about it, and that people need help these people so that they can live better lives. I think my speech went ok but I did need to do some more stuff to improve it more. I think that if I slowed down and look up at the audience I would of done it better
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Kia ora, Harry that was a great speech comment and I think you really explained how you thought there was a lot of poverty in this world and how we need to change it I think you could improve by building your self-esteem you really showed us how we should change the status of poverty
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